His life is a prison.
– His heart is caged.
A long gone lover,
– whose memory has aged.
He couldn’t hurt,
– the one he care.
Lies upon the hinges,
– hope and despair.
He could leave home,
– walk forever if he liked.
To get rid of the pain,
– and it just might.
But he couldn’t escape,
– what really hurts.
Tonight even the sky,
– was in no mood to flirt.
Vintage Vow 
Very nice one…
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Thank you. 🙂
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Nice flowing verses
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Thank you so much. I try to improve.😊📝
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We are all on the learning curve trying to improve and innovate..
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One can not run away from pain….It will go wherever you go….Poignant lines.
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So true. It’s inevitable but there’s always hope for something better. ✨ Thank you for your words. Good to be following you.😊📝
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WoW!! Good to see you playing on poetic verse.Beautiful work👌👌☺
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Thank you.😊 I’m glad you liked it.
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Your welcome 🙂
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wow! this is moody and unforgiving but I love it 🙂
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Thanks daisy. Your words made my evening.😊
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The emotion in this moves the one who reads your words. Powerful! I know all about the pain you speak of. I have been doing a lot of hiking to work through that pain and to release it. Just beautiful work!! ❤
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Thanks Amy for your appraisal. Good to know one could relate. I hope you find release and only cherish with good vibes. Lots of love. ✨
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I’ve had several losses of Loved Ones lately, Monica, and the pain of missing the physical body is intense. I’m a woman of action and so I hike, and allow the green to heal my soul and Heart. I am getting release and consciously choose to focus on beauty and not my tears. Sometimes through the tears I create Beauty. My camera in many ways is my therapist and Mother is my Healer. ❤
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A bit burnt and smoked …… but there is a thing in your words, that always pulls in a string somewhere in everyone 🙂
Take care
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Very nice
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a perfect melancholy song…i could see the vast unlit sky through your words…beautiful…
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It feels so perfect while reading!! The rhyme is smooth, beautifully composed indeed 🙂
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Excellent imagery and what a great finish. Very clever. I could sometimes just keep on walking myself – the idea seems romantic and a little melancholy. Thanks for sharing
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Loved it..beautifull are its words.
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Congratulations!
I have nominated your blog for the “The Sunshine Blogger Award”.
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This is a beautiful piece of work. The rhyming, meanings, finishing – just perfect. 😊👍
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Hey! It’s good to know you liked it. Thanks for sparing time..I heed your literary work and must say you got so much potential. I couldn’t stop.💭🌌
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That is a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much, hun !! 😊😊
Love, Anushka.
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Very well done I like how it’s structured
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Nicely constructed but honesty in the middle I think you lost your momentum a little bit….poetry is not my job I said what I feel friend
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Thanks for sharing your honest opinion. I’m glad. I shall work on it. 😊
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Beautiful words! Stay inspired 🌷
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Tonight even the sky,
– was in no mood to flirt.
That sums its all ❤
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Beautiful…..👌
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Thank you for reading. I’m glad you liked it.😊
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Amazing! It touched the heart.
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Reblogged this on Scribbled to Paper.
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